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Fantasy Dream Poem


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When I go to sleep at night,


The first thing I see in the dark is light.



As my sleep deepens, so do my thoughts;


My dream world greets me and I know I’m caught.



I’m caught in an unconscious state with all of my swirling fancies.


There are delicate butterflies, light fluffy clouds, many chocolate candies, and other fantasies.



All of the colors are so vibrant and bright.


It makes me wonder, where’s the dark light?



So many grandiose things here, all beautiful and kind,


There are also surprises here, but they’re always benign.



As my journey continues through my vivid subconscious state,


I see delusional monkeys, and they scream: leave through the gate!


I’ve been in the dream world for too long, says the setting sun that tells me it’s getting late.



As I turned to the portal that would take me back to reality,


I realized then that I don’t want to go back, in actuality.



But now it’s too late, I’ve already crossed dimensions.


When my eyes flutter open, the effect of my dream released all of my tensions.



I know that now, I must start a new day,


But wait for me Fantasy World, for I will make a way,


Because there is no doubt that I’ll be back later this day.



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I (think) this is the very first poem I've ever written. This was written at the end of last year for an English assignment (sort of). :D
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=CSnyder:iconCSnyder: Feb 11, 2008, 5:11:13 PM
you paint a pretty picture with words:)
~NotIntoIt3456:iconNotIntoIt3456: Feb 11, 2008, 5:15:05 PM
Thank you so much!! :heart: :D

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~melita-setiawan:iconmelita-setiawan: Feb 14, 2008, 5:07:26 AM
I've never made any poems in english before but i know that your poem is good. It makes the ones who read it imagining the things you write there.
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~NotIntoIt3456:iconNotIntoIt3456: Feb 14, 2008, 2:49:04 PM
Thank you so much. :heart:

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Where's my shame?? idk :shrug:
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I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. :D
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